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By: Courting Destiny » Blog Archive » 3WW–phone, stumbled, windy: Colliding Worlds-

Wed, 31 Oct 2007 17:40:34 +0000

[...] The first three chapters: One Two Three Nell and Justin went to the living room. He motioned for her to sit on the couch. It wasn’t one that she remembered from yesterday or from her interlude with Denny. She supposed it was an interlude. Maybe it had been a hallucination. How could she trust Justin? How could she not? He gave her some more water. She had been drinking the water constantly in the closet. She couldn’t imagine ever feeling satiated. [...]

By: Herb

Herb — Wed, 24 Oct 2007 18:21:57 +0000

More riveting plot twists. Looking forward to see what you have in store for us next. Good thing I don’t have to wait very long.

By: cooper

cooper — Sun, 21 Oct 2007 19:52:04 +0000

I agree of course. It was excellent. I think you get better every day – if that is possible. I am also pretty sure I commented on this already….am I back in the spam bin?

By: Daisy

Daisy — Sun, 21 Oct 2007 06:38:52 +0000

Ohh excellent writing! Although I would crave for more sensual details.

By: a.tag.along.traveler

a.tag.along.traveler — Sat, 20 Oct 2007 21:40:23 +0000

wow you are going to continue this right…what happened!!!???I have to say I loved this it was great! Nicely done!

By: Mad Kane

Mad Kane — Fri, 19 Oct 2007 18:53:58 +0000

Good read — engrossing and intense!

By: gautami

gautami — Fri, 19 Oct 2007 15:30:03 +0000

Totally engrossing and fascinating tale.

“She stared at the bedroom rug. It looked like a field of blue and yellow flowers. If she thought hard enough she could be playing in the flowers.
She ran through the field. The flowers were so pretty. They smelled so good. She was going to pick some and give them to a woman who was smiling at her.”

Beautiful paragraph!

By: Bone

Bone — Fri, 19 Oct 2007 13:54:26 +0000

I agree with the others. It’s riveting, like a book you can’t put down.

Also loved the field of flowers paragraph. Gave insight into her mind and possibly some hint about her condition.

And this is just brilliant:
“Her memories were fuzzy. So fuzzy they felt like a silent film speeded up faster than the eyes could watch.”

By: Rae Trigg

Rae Trigg — Fri, 19 Oct 2007 01:14:30 +0000

Wow, intense. I’ll definitely be coming back to see the rest.

By: TC

TC — Fri, 19 Oct 2007 00:39:43 +0000

I want to believe Nell is real, but I’m not so sure. You could be trying to trick us…