Comments on: 3WW: initial, knock, weather

By: Courting Destiny » Blog Archive » 3WW–phone, stumbled, windy: Colliding Worlds-

Wed, 31 Oct 2007 16:43:16 +0000

[...] I screwed up copying this. Just redid it Have written chapters in advance. The next two will explain much more. And sorry if you tried to make sense out of five of the same chapters together. Screwe One Two Three Nell and Justin went to the living room. He motioned for her to sit on the couch. It wasn’t one that she remembered from yesterday or from her interlude with Denny. She supposed it was an interlude. Maybe it had been a hallucination. How could she trust Justin? How could she not? He gave her some more water. She had been drinking the water constantly in the closet. She couldn’t imagine ever feeling satiated. [...]

By: Herb

Herb — Wed, 24 Oct 2007 18:17:10 +0000

Riveting story. I didn’t see that ending coming. I got a little behind on my blog reading, so I’m starting back at the beginning of this trilogy and working my way forward. On to Part 2!

By: TC

TC — Tue, 16 Oct 2007 00:01:08 +0000

I honestly was not anticipating that: you kept me in suspense.

Sorry it took me so long to get to this: I finally just posted tonight! O:)

Hope you made it through the weekend OK.

By: a.tag.along.traveler

a.tag.along.traveler — Sun, 14 Oct 2007 20:40:06 +0000

oh thank god for the last paragraph!!! Great job on projecting the emotions.

By: Square1

Square1 — Sat, 13 Oct 2007 07:12:28 +0000

Very well written. Now I’m left wondering if Denny at the door was a dream, or her state of amnesia is. This piece would be good continued or standing alone. The reader is left wanting to know more, but sometimes that is a good technique because it encourages them to get their own imaginations to work.

By: cooper

cooper — Sat, 13 Oct 2007 01:43:13 +0000

I agree with Bone, different than you and with a twist. I liked it. You can write anything.

Odd to say, but hugs to you on your personal worst week of the year.

By: Dariana

Dariana — Fri, 12 Oct 2007 15:28:50 +0000

Popped in to say hello and to invite you and your readers to enter a contest which started today over at my blog. Come on by and enter!

By: Michelle Johnson

Michelle Johnson — Fri, 12 Oct 2007 02:33:49 +0000

Excellent story this week, Pia. I didn’t see the ending coming. I would like to see this one developed further. Keep up the good work.

Have a nice night
Michelle

By: Bone

Bone — Fri, 12 Oct 2007 02:32:13 +0000

This was very different from you somehow. It was compelling throughout. What’s reality and what isn’t. Definitely leaves itself open to a continuation.

I’ve known a couple of people who were in serious car accidents and were never the same. Often I think to myself how even though they go on breathing, they were robbed of so much life.

By: gautami

gautami — Thu, 11 Oct 2007 17:44:49 +0000

Some dreams seems so real but….

Dark but I like it.