Comments on: 3WW–Icy, pause, train: Colliding Worlds

By: a.tag.along.traveler

a.tag.along.traveler — Sun, 18 Nov 2007 16:33:45 +0000

PLEASE tell me hes not to late!!!!

By: cooper

cooper — Sat, 17 Nov 2007 16:37:07 +0000

Love the story as it develops. Good stuff pia.
I always wait until I have time to do more than a drive by to read your stuff.
You father’s story and the way it was written was fabulous.

By: sage

sage — Sat, 17 Nov 2007 00:55:07 +0000

wow, lots of twist and turns here–interesting developments–I like the shower scene

By: Bone

Bone — Fri, 16 Nov 2007 04:37:30 +0000

I made a page for what some people to be the best thing in this blog.

I resemble that remark.

By: Bone

Bone — Fri, 16 Nov 2007 04:36:22 +0000

She walked into the bedroom where Ella was trying to grasp something that was invisible to everybody but her.

This line perfectly displays how brilliantly you’ve portrayed Ella.

Love Justin’s vivid memories of the last time he’d seen Nell before she was kidnapped.

Lots of twists. Lots of layers and depth. Please submit this somewhere.

By: tlp

tlp — Fri, 16 Nov 2007 03:27:19 +0000

What a wonderful story! (About your coming home to your parents.) It really touches me.

I have the written account of the night I was born. It was written by my sister Mary who was almost 10 at the time. I was born at home and my three sisters were in the house at my birth. Very different story. I was the fourth of four girls. My father was not happy about it.

By: UL

UL — Thu, 15 Nov 2007 13:20:52 +0000

Pia, that was a beautiful story from your Dad. And I love the name Pia, thank you for sharing something so personal. Take care, UL

By: UL

UL — Thu, 15 Nov 2007 13:14:15 +0000

Very nice imagination and supern story telling, looking forward to more. Thank you.

By: TC

TC — Wed, 14 Nov 2007 22:30:36 +0000

It was supposed to softly snow all day. The weather was just cold enough for it to stick without being icy. Justin and Nell were going to meet at Central Park at Two, make snow angels, and go ice skating.

You made me want this. THIS. Snow and winter and snow angels and ice skating and I can’t even ice skate. Sigh.

And yeah, I’d be propriatery about that rock too

By: Tumblewords

Tumblewords — Wed, 14 Nov 2007 21:24:47 +0000

the complexity increases and the tension grows…good read!