Comments on: 3WW: Colliding Worlds; chapter 17; gossip, naive, station

By: susan

susan — Fri, 08 Feb 2008 14:29:55 +0000

Love what you do, but I couldn’t follow all the text. Am I the only one reading strange fonts and cut off sentences?

By: a.tag.along.traveler

a.tag.along.traveler — Mon, 14 Jan 2008 20:26:38 +0000

oh wow this flowed so well!! my god its good!!! Whats going to happen next?!!?!

By: UL

UL — Mon, 14 Jan 2008 13:03:57 +0000

Oh Pia, I love the way you concluded…and how you played theback and forth personalities and the fear that causes in Justin…been behind in my reading again. My daughter wasnt feeling too good! So I got to post not read Hope to catch up soon.

By: Bone

Bone — Sun, 13 Jan 2008 18:57:21 +0000

Well, you’ve always been into Nell’s head, but now you’re really into it. Love the battle between the three people inside her.

And to answer Gautami’s question, yes, she’s going to publish it. She better!

Your writing…. so many of the lines are unique and well put together, not cliched at all.

By: susan

susan — Thu, 10 Jan 2008 18:44:43 +0000

Like what do. Thanks for coming bes, too. Need to add your link because I’ve enjoyed every time I’ve been by. Peace.

By: TC

TC — Thu, 10 Jan 2008 15:34:58 +0000

I like the switch at the end, the idea of the prince kissing the toad.

By: cooper

cooper — Thu, 10 Jan 2008 06:43:17 +0000

As always.

By: jujee

jujee — Thu, 10 Jan 2008 02:02:57 +0000

I liked how you collated the many thoughts and emotions of her into the piece titled “station”. Humans are definitely rationalising beings, and your piece shows this.

By: pjd

pjd — Wed, 09 Jan 2008 22:21:25 +0000

wow. I am speechless. I confess I didn’t follow all of it, but it began to come together in bits and pieces, which is sort of how I expect you wanted it to happen.

By: paisley

paisley — Wed, 09 Jan 2008 20:02:30 +0000

i have assumed the lowest possible stature in life,, not because i am unable to rise above it,, but because of the sour taste it leaves in my mouth when i find myself associated with it… the descendant hike,, was and is difficult at times… but the personal rewards are many….

i will have to catch up on colliding worlds,, as i have been more or less out of the loop for a couple of weeks…..