Comments on: 3WW–allure, perch, vivid: A prequel to meeting Jeffrey

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Pages tagged "vivid" — Sun, 03 May 2009 16:09:27 +0000

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By: Gillian

Gillian — Fri, 24 Apr 2009 11:29:53 +0000

Reading part two felt like coming home, relaxing into something familiar and loved. You give a sense of place without long-winded descriptions. I can see it all very clearly.

‘The once overbearing love I had felt for him had long ago turned to love for a friend.’

That touched me personally and sparked a memory I had almost forgotten. Thank you for that.

I don’t know if you will appreciate the thought but every time I read your writing I am reminded of Kerouac. I’m not entirely sure why. It isn’t location but something in the way you speak, I think. Looking forward to reading part three now.

By: Bone

Bone — Sat, 18 Apr 2009 06:01:51 +0000

I agree with the previous commenter about wanting to know more. Especially about your motto of be careful what you wish for.

the last truly uncomplicated day of my life.

A truly great line. And so Pia.

By: susan

susan — Fri, 17 Apr 2009 10:13:18 +0000

Hi Pia,
It’s been a long time. Glad to hear things are moving along. Reading you again, I’m wondering how did I fall out of the habit. Your writing always comes off as if the perfect line is natural. Solid pacing, great build up and settings that immerse the reader in the story.

How long have you been writing and when will I be buying your book?

Thanks for coming by.

By: MichaelO

MichaelO — Thu, 16 Apr 2009 20:44:56 +0000

Having just returned from a 3 day trip to NYC, I could actually smell this story. Now this is a proper memoir. Thoroughly enjoyed it!

BTW, my wallet was stolen everyday I was there. A pub lunch for family of 4; burgers, bangers, shepards pie and a Guiness or two at $160! New York was cheaper when it was “dangerous”….

By: jacob

jacob — Thu, 16 Apr 2009 15:27:43 +0000

Perect stuff. I love the picture too, it works well with the story. Catching up. looks like you are settling in. Your getting back into writer mode.

By: Doug

Doug — Thu, 16 Apr 2009 13:27:35 +0000

The photo’s great and I agree with the people above that the writing is great.

By: cooper

cooper — Thu, 16 Apr 2009 03:28:52 +0000

I loved this pia, but you knew I would.

By: b

Thu, 16 Apr 2009 02:53:48 +0000

I still am reading…that is a very good sign. I, like everyone else, am interested to find out more.

By: Tumblewords

Tumblewords — Wed, 15 Apr 2009 22:20:58 +0000

Excellent – the imagery works so well.