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One word–shore

You’re given one word and one minute to write.  It was my first time.  Break please!

She walks into the water which is chang­ing col­ors from sum­mer teal to win­ter gray. The waves are tiny. How much longer must she walk before she gets caught in a riptide?

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5 Responses to “One word–shore”

  1. October 26th, 2010 at 15:58 | #1

    I like it. The first sentence in particular.

  2. October 26th, 2010 at 16:38 | #2

    I much prefer summer teal to winter gray.

    I just much prefer summer to winter I think.

  3. October 26th, 2010 at 20:56 | #3

    I like it too. Both the piece and the concept. I think I’ma run with it.

  4. October 27th, 2010 at 17:09 | #4

    I’d have done a redneck version. “You shore made that look easy, Miss Pia.” :)

    I actually do like the one word writing prompt idea.

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